Music Video First Draft Feedback

We presented the first draft of our music video to our class and we received a mixture of positive and critical feedback.

Here are some examples of positive feedback we received:

"Lots of really nice editing."
"I loved how the shots became distorted in correlation to the video."
"There use of bright colours goes in hand with the nature of the song."
"Editing flows well throughout - suits genre and her image."
"360 with the dogs is very effective."
"When is goes slower, I like how all visuals link with the pace."
Creative and interesting shots that clearly show the artist image."

Here are some examples of critical feedback:

"Some of the shots were used a few times."
"Gets slightly repetitive at the end of the video."
"Sometimes too many close ups lip synching."
"Not many transitions, mainly straight cuts."
"The shot with Nova on the sofa with the bubble bath image above didn't flow as well as the other editing."
"Leg and fairy light shot is used quite a lot."